Planning to have children is one of the most essential decisions in a couple’s life.These days, the number of people intend to have children in later life are increasing noticeably. I believe that this trend has more benefits than drawbacks.
On the one hand,there are potential risks and challenges associated with having a child in old age. For the mother, there is an increased risk of complications during pregnancy and childbirth, such as high blood pressure and gestational diabetes. Moreover, for the father, there is an increased risk of genetic mutations in sperm which may be lead to developmental disorders in the child. Not only health problem, having child at old age may be have a huge gap between parents and their child. For instance, the today’s generation does not like others interfering in any their person matters, they do not like their parents odering them, the do not like their parents grumble about their behavior.
On the other hand, having child in the later lijfe sometimes bring them more benefits than drawbacks. Firstly, older parents may have more financial stability and resources to provide for their child's needs. Some youngsters have the plan that they will effort to work when they are young and spend more time with their children always need the attention and follow-up of their parents. Because if they do not feel the love of their parents, children will feel inferior to their friends, abandoned and will gradually give rise to scary and scary consequences. Child when they have stable in income. Have some determined that .
In conclusion ,the tendency to have children at later ages is caused by a number of factors, such as the competitiveness of the job market for young adults, and both the positive and negative impacts of it can be seen in families and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98684210526 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65999658512 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555921052632 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2451164234 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212189119895 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820724032853 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737180122638 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147268596362 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485214578347 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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