In some countries, people waste a lot of food which is bought in shops and restaurants. What do you think are the reasons? What can be done to solve this problem?
It is true that a large amount of food bought from shops and restaurants is being wasted in some countries. And there are actually a number of reasons behind this view and several solutions should be adopted by governments and individuals to improve the situation.
There are two primary reasons why this trend occurs. One reason is that these days there are many people who are extremely concerned about their health so they avoid eating food that is put over night in a fridge or is too greasy… and there are thousands of other reason why they determined to throw away these food or leftovers in some cases.
Furthermore, there are actually some person who are at first buy anything that they think they need in just one shopping and then realize that they already had these things at home and their fridge are full of food and they try their best to put all of these things in a fridge so there is definitely some food that might be expired and they have to throw them away.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken to prevent this problem. The first solution would be governments should impose a fine on those people whose food throw- away is considerable or do a survey on how often they throw food away in order to make a relevant fine to these people. A second measure would be every restaurants and shops should make a requirements that customers mustn’t order too many dishes or if they would like they have to make a deal to finish all of them or they will have to pay the money for the leftovers. For shops, shop assistants also should advice buyers not to buy to many things without considering clearly whether they need them.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for wasting food and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t fine to these people. A second measure would be every restaurants and shops sho...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a requirement' or simply 'requirements'?
Suggestion: a requirement; requirements
...every restaurants and shops should make a requirements that customers mustn’t order too many d...
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Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, furthermore, if, second, so, then, in conclusion, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60815047022 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36676077973 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492163009404 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.6062109805 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217495765834 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111296329574 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676878818096 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152273682842 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570941453946 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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