In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars.
Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
There is an increasingly popular phenomenon observed in small town centres where people have the tendency to travel to large megamalls at the outskirts, and this results in economic hardship for local in-town businesses. In my opinion, the benefits of this social consumer behaviour shift undoubtedly outweigh its drawbacks.
The shift undeniably offers people several benefits in the way that it would encourage urban expansion and emigration to the suburban area. This thus alleviates urban density issues and allows more square space per capita for the city population, which is an essential part of human wellness.
Some may argue that the social behaviour change, while helps to de-congested the small town centre, negatively impacts its property price. In spite of this mentioned drawback, one would easily recognise that land value in the suburban area would simultaneously increase, and this is the reason I believe that the shift in purchase behaviour is a positive measure of urban development.
Another beneficial societal impact this shift brings about is that families can have great bonding during out-of-town trips. This gives both adults and children the chance to take short weekend getaways for recreation and shopping.
While some may assume traveling is tiring and time-consuming, the recreational benefits of these trips are undoubtedly inherent. Traveling helps relieve stress, bring novelty and excitement. Shopping in itself is also a form of therapy.
In conclusion, while driving to large megastores in the outskirt area may have some adverse impacts, I believe they are outweighed by the more significant positive benefits and economic values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56809338521 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8202789871 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614785992218 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6551458877 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184675592051 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600697570017 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767925527303 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878690897581 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583808209969 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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