There is no doubt that in past, women were living in four walls of the house while nowadays they enter into every field. Some people agree that women should allowed to to take part in all type of jobs such as the army, the navy and the air force. I partially agree with this statement and numerous reasons behind it.
First and foremost reason is that these types of jobs do not only require physical strength. Intellectual spill and academic knowledge are most important for every job.because there are so many posts in army, navy and air force in which intelligence power consider than strong physique.Moreover women are emotionally strong as compare to males. Sometimes in tough situations these emotions help to solve the problems easily.
Furthermore, women are quite good management as well as leadership. As a result of it, when they get a chance to lead the team in battle field then they easily manage it quickly. For instance, women in house always manage their time in household core and they also know how to handle difficult situations.
However, some persons agree that they are not fit in such kinds of jobs . they think that women are not physically strong as compare to men. Apart from that they are not mentally prepared for difficult situation such as in field of battle, accidental situations and to face the terrorist.
To conclude, women should allowed to join army, navy and air force so that they can get a chance to show their spirit and nowadays it is seen that women are rubbing shoulder with men in every field. So at least give them one chance to take part in such jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, apart from, at least, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73309608541 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45044441543 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555160142349 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.762943387 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192161625761 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695470852154 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600525030837 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111078097032 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491584144675 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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