In some countries, students while studying lived away from home.
Do you think the advantage outweigh disadvantage?
Some university undergraduate lived away from home during the course of their study. It is agreed that the advantage of this outweighs the disadvantage. Firstly, this essay will discuss the advantage such as independency and evaluate the disadvantage of lack of sense of family support.
To begin, the main advantage of living away from family is independence. The student learned basic life skills such as time management and management of finances, which are the major abilities needed by a person. For example, in a recent survey conducted by the UK government, most of the respondents have favorable responses because being independent leads to a successful life. If the students are not given the opportunity to live away from their family, they will not learn and will not succeed in life. It is clear that being alone and away from family will be beneficial in later adult life.
However, the major disadvantage of studying away from home is a lack of family support. Even the presence of advanced technology platforms such as the Skype or Viber is not enough to fill their sense of belongingness. Students at a young age are vulnerable to such emotional feeling of homesickness and loneliness. For instance, a study from the Central University of Queensland claimed that most of the students living in a hall of residence have a low or failing grades in college. This is because they do not have their family to support them physically.
In conclusion, although there are disadvantages such as homesickness, the advantage of independence is more significant. This essay supports that advantage outweighs disadvantage. It is predicted that more student will be studying away from home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260726072607 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.145214521452 0.155533422707 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0825082508251 0.0946595960268 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0594059405941 0.0501214627716 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.03300330033 0.0437548338989 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.161716171617 0.122226691241 132% => OK
Participles: 0.042904290429 0.0403226058552 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02526645011 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.019801980198 0.0326793684256 61% => OK
Particles: 0.003300330033 0.00163938923432 201% => OK
Determiners: 0.102310231023 0.0861772015684 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.016501650165 0.021408717616 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.003300330033 0.011925033212 28% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1703.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 316.048096192 88% => OK
Chars per words: 6.14801444043 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339350180505 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274368231047 0.28420135186 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.223826714801 0.203846283523 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.166064981949 0.137316102897 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02526645011 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.037074148 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498194945848 0.56093040696 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.1522525946 60.7387585426 79% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3125 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5967845327 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4375 127.492653851 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.814263465372 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 44.7493231047 49.1944974215 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.95833333333 1.69124875643 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264007223262 0.332605444948 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11840469967 0.102741220458 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0771297261654 0.0668466124924 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.538542225261 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116623699819 0.148594505496 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119277640496 0.134430193775 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630494721702 0.0742795772207 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.368092622924 0.324371583561 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0800882371295 0.0638462369009 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197585884586 0.228012699653 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228288805624 0.058150111329 39% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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