Gone are the days when the budding one's were entirely reliable on their parents for bread and butter and for paying their tuition expenses. Now the trend of part-time jobs has come into light.There are distinct nations where youngsters are galvanised to work part-time and become self-reliable. Some hoi-polloi deem that it is a good practice whereas others tend to have a different perception. I will discuss both the opinion and my views in the forthcoming paraphrases.
Some masses think that motivating youngsters to work part-time would boost their confidence and simultaneously they will polish their interpersonal skills. Apart from this, they will learn to work as a team. Moreover, this would be expedient in imparting the value of money and they would be more cautious while spending it. They will get a glimpse of job sector and hence will be very much clear while choosing the right career for them and they are more likely to have an incandescent future.Moreover they'll find number of mature people in the job sector who can even guide them for their future.In this way they will wield their time efficaciously and they'll give wide berth to various immoral or unlawful activities.
There are masses from another school of thought who has the perception that kids should not be engaged in part-time jobs and they should only focus on academic part as focusing at two different things at one time would lead them nowhere.The idea of part-time would burden the students all the more and they would start suffering from various disorders .They are not mentally and intellectually prepared for working in the job sector and it might demoralise them to work ever again in the future.They should utilise this time in studying in building memories.
in conclusion,ii would like to say, kids should not be encouraged for thepart -time jobs. As this is the only age where they can enjoy, relax. working at this small age would hamper their holistic development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01829268293 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69930560397 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564024390244 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.377615113 49.4020404114 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.166666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151356369008 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636563007847 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492799424456 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101591527668 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426990022723 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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