In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
There is no doubt that education has a considerable bearing on children development. Because of this how to provide children the best education always attracts parents’ interests. Nowadays, there is a growing homeschooling. While I agree that it may bring some benefits in some extend, I would argue that there are more drawbacks.
On the one hand, educating children at home can be advantageous because of some reasons. Firstly, homeschooling can strengthen family bonds because homeschooling families spend a lot of time playing and learning together, which naturally creates close ties between brothers and sisters and between parents and children. Secondly, home-schoolers have a great deal of flexibility in how and what they learn. Home schooled children can receive education which is attuned to their needs, style of learning, interests and personality, which would help them develop a passion on learning and, as a result, they can have a better life in the future. Therefore, it is understandable why there are a growing number of parents deciding to teach their children themselves at home.
However, the aforementioned advantages can be outweighed by its disadvantages. Home schooled children often miss socialization and interactions with their peers. These interactions are extremely crucial to their development because by playing with their friends they could learn how to get on with others and develop social skills which is essential to their later life. In addition, schools offer better overall education experience. It means that school subjects are taught by up to ten different teachers who are highly trained in universities, and parents who want to educate their children at home would have to take time to learn all these subjects. Consequently, their children may not receive high quality lesson and skills.
In conclusion while home –schooling children may beneficial, I believe that the drawbacks are more significant than the benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...that it may bring some benefits in some extend, I would argue that there are more draw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46732026144 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08667872381 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1914571605 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305704354831 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103568641131 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674431140702 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172448462828 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558252472062 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.