some countries young people are encourage to work or travel for a year between finisihing high school and starting university studies,discuss the advantage and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this ?
In certain countries young people are interesting to work or travel a year in between end of high school and beginnings of university studies.This essay is going to discuss about the advantages of traveling in between studies.how it will help in your future career.
young people who travel or work a year get some real-time life lessons they will learn in their journey,such as while they were working in one year.They will learn how real time working.In school they learn theoretical lessons.In working they will know how much hard to earn money,this will teach them how to make choices in life,they make themselves prepare for real world and they learn how important is education in their life's journey,so the young people who travel learn or possibility of knowing things real time practice.
young people some times they fall into a trap of one year traveling give them attractions in life.such as,young people who work they will see the quick gratification in instant money with their work and earning money they see the freedom in their life,they will not answer to the guardian because they are earning money,and even they fall into the bad habits like gambling.The young people who saw the instant money they do not see the full picture of it,they make their life goals very limited.In the way young people can attract to some of the things they can not able to think properly.
In conclusion young people who saw the instant money can fall into the bad habits and wrong decisions ,but the young people who work or travel take this situation most useful of them they plan their life and know how valuable the education and learning.
- some countries young people are encourage to work or travel for a year between finisihing high school and starting university studies discuss the advantage and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this 56
- some countries young people are encourage to work or travel for a year between finisihing high school and starting university studies discuss the advantage and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88256227758 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45321982485 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473309608541 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.2975951904 345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.652563447 49.4020404114 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 343.0 106.682146367 322% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.25 20.7667163134 338% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286735062861 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218871930966 0.084324248473 260% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651904344832 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218871930966 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651904344832 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.7 13.0946893788 280% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.35 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.2 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.1190380762 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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