It is true that in few countries, youngsters are motivated to jobs or travel for a year after completing secondary school and starting college studies. This essay will articulate its merits and demerits in subsequent paragraphs.
To initial, there are various advantages of doing work or travel after finishing school. It is crucial to do work or travel after completing school to feel relax and comfortable. In other words, children usually spend their age in studying in schools and have plethora burden of studies as well as they do not get enough time to work or travel. Moreover, it helps them to do all the things that they want to do and learn many skills. For instance, a study show that 70% children in the world learn new skills and surge their knowledge by doing jobs or traveling after schooling. Thus, there are many benefits of taking year for work or travel.
On the other hand, there are few drawbacks of taking a gap. It is not good to take a gap of studies for work or travel. To explicate it, teenagers mind is reroute by taking gap for work and travel bechee they interact and communicate with many people in a year which changes
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, second, thus, well, for instance, as well as, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63902439024 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48232778245 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551219512195 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5388709253 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4545454545 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308247908334 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128517708226 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708549631262 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192592371396 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457510195711 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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