In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, it is common that youngsters take a gap year before they commence tertiary education. That twelve month-period is used usually to work or travel abroad. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this statement.
On the one hand, one of the disadvantages is that the habit of studying can be broken. This means that young people who have been studying since primary school until they complete High education, they have developed the skills as well as the habit needed as students. As a consequence of the decision of not starting university studies straight away, a high percentage of students fall behind with courses. Moreover, some of them even have regretted the idea of taking a one-year break between secondary and tertiary studies. To illustrate this fact with an example, a recent study conducted by the University of Bristol showed that over a half of students who had been working or travelling the year before starting university studies, they ended up quitting their courses.
On the other hand, young people who decide either working or travelling that year are probable to become more open-minded and mature compared to others with the same age. In other words, the opportunity of meeting new people and cultures allow students to gain new perspectives and views in relation to their future goals. As a result, those who decide to keep studying, they feel sure about the steps they want to follow. For example, it is very frequent that students change the subject of their courses once they return from the twelve month-period breaks.
Takin all the above into consideration, this well-known gap year among students may cause some disadvantages such as breaking the habit of studying, but it can also help students to grow up personally and professionally
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, second, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08783783784 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70729339852 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577702702703 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.003615921 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.846153846 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258470626234 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798212441869 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468850436319 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13276639275 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552615485537 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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