In some countries young people are not only richer, but also safer and healthier than ever before.
However, they are often less happy. What do you think are the reasons for this and what can be done to help?
Nowadays, in the era of modern technology, and new generalisations beat the youngster's inner strength. Adults make them feel safer and healthy through exercise even though they get to feel unhappy and nervous because of study and workloads l. There are possible reasons for this but there are some solutions to prevent sadness as well.
In developing generation, all the teenagers and adults run to achieve their desire goal for life. It might disturb for youngsters. Furthermore, they get a job at a young age and without enjoying their lives they started earning themselves. As well as they have starts to live with laden of things on their mind and feel stressed and anxious. In comparison to the old generation people they do not have the rights to do such things because of less independence but, Today's generation fully aware of their own decision and lives with independence. Today's younger have a plethora of work opportunities. They can fit themself by yoga and exercise and maintain their physical strength but what about the pressure in mind?
Moreover, the younger who starts earning in their developing phase such as high school studies they might start using drugs because of the burden of life and when they can not find drugs they start annoying behaviour. I think parents should focus on their child and give them fixed pocket money and advise them on how to save money. Apart from that parents should create a healthy and friendly environment where younger can easily share their feelings in front of family members. Parents should have been regulating and observe their son or daughter that they are on the tract or changed there way.
In conclusion, there is a positive aspect of earning but their drawbacks always take place. On my point of view, parents give restrict to the child regarding annoying things which is unnecessary for them And provide them pocket money to use for their regular basis. Happiness can not be buying from market it comes from within.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, apart from, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94626865672 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51165250522 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573134328358 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6187279607 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4705882353 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149333650937 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479761479982 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397881809045 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882605310121 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026216720148 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.