Lots of graduated highschool's students want to receive a job or travel few months before entering to university. While I accept that there are benefits and drawbacks, I would argue that it is better to take few months off.
It is obvious that this gap period of months bring advantages for students. Firstly, these highschool leavers would have chance to open-mind, which motivated to help them in choosing suitable course after. Secondly, taking a gap year means leaving family for times. This not only establish independence inside each leavers but also help students acquire more responsibility with themself.
While taking gap year has its advantages, it might have its drawbacks. The main shortcoming is that a number of highschool leavers may start their career later than their inferior who do not taking times to working or traveling after graduating. In addition, risk of taking time to travel such as danger, costs, ... etc would be concerned things. For instance, if students travel right after finishing highschool, they would not have enough money to pay all fees. As a result, they need to lend from their parents.
In conclusion, it may have many benefits of leaving right after highschool's graduation but balancing with disavantages is necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'argue'
Suggestion: argue
...ere are benefits and drawbacks, I would argued that it is better to take few months of...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to appropriate'
Suggestion: to appropriate
...hich motivated to help them in choosing appropriate course after. Secondly, taking a gap ye...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsibility with themself. While taking gap year has its advantages, it might ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77652263268 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656862745098 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0648073283 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3846153846 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121658759065 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041580338546 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377718190522 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638832672529 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429379192002 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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