In some cultures old people are valued more, while in other cultures youth is considered more valuable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A healthy society is a combination of both juniors and seniors with respect to age factor(not needed) and no one can deny the importance of these members in a community. However, there are two notions. One believes that the elders should receive respect more(Should recieve more respect) while others think (Propose) that the teenagers have more right to get the same. I tend to argue both thoughts and share my own point of view.
However, there are two popular notion. One claims that elders are given more respect in some societies while other proposes that youth are valued more in others.
In the first place, the people, who assume that the old pupils get more respect, they (not needed) have a couple of reasons to defend their thought. Firstly, they are of view that senior members hold a wide range of practical experience to spend a good life so they have a right to avail honour from others. Lastly, they also believe that they spent most of their life in struggling for the betterment of their family and society and now it is their turn to get reward and satisfaction for their whole work. Therefore, seniors are supposed to enjoy more respect and worth.
Nevertheless, others, who negate the first notion, also possess some logical points to get themselves noticed. Initially, they claim that the teenagers Youngsters) are the real strength of a society as they are going to serve their country in future so they should get worth from the society to show their abilities. To cap it all, they also stress on the point that Juniors are the future stars of that region and they shall perform better if they get confidence and value from their community because it will strengthen their will power to do something better for the humanity. Hence, this is worth saying that youngsters should receive more weight from society.
In my outlook, both minds carry equal weight therefore one thought should not get more importance. I believe that every individual of a community should benefit the basic respect to lead a good and content society. This practice will enhance the productivity of each unit of that civilization. In this way, everyone will be satisfied and will play his role more actively. In other words, both ages should receive equal weightage in terms of respect and honour.
On my part, I certainly believe that both schools carry equal weight.
To sum up, society should give worth to juniors as well as seniors to make best unit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, in other words, with respect to, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2217.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 454.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88325991189 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38784095619 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9407150236 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.68 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.16 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136088037239 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041071324589 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639583408345 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693302885889 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803514254307 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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