Some governments provide free healthcare for their citizens, but other governments do not provide any health service at all, and their citizens are expected to rely on private healthcare provision.
The benefits of government-provided free healthcare far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree?
In this modern era, in order to satisfy the urgent need for health services in society, Governments has introduced the free and public healthcare system to all citizens in the world. Since then, there has always been dividing opinion regarding whether government-provided medical services is beneficial to society or not. In this essay, I will argue that private healthcare system should be a better choice for patients than public ones.
At first glance, private medical services are costly to some people; but at a closer look, patients can access better and cutting-edge facilities compared to limited healthcare provision in public systems. With the help of improved devices, treatment will be greatly effective and we can in turn minimize the incidence of treatment failure. Additionally, if the investment from Government is not sufficient to support public healthcare, the standards of treatment can severely decline. Consequently, patients, in general, would suffer from the lack of good-quality health services.
On the other hand, in many developing countries, due to the fact that public healthcare system could provide medical services with a cheaper price, publically funded are becoming more preferable. Most people reject to pay an excessive amount of money for private services; thus, nationalized systems would be more affordable and a better choice for them. Furthermore, citizens will be a given universal free healthcare which could offer a consistent and effective treatment to everyone and this system also somewhat prevents diseases or epidemics from being more prevalent to the society.
In conclusion, even though the publically funded healthcare costs patients at a lower price, it is impossible to avoid the fact that private systems are still more advantageous and they can supply better treatment than public ones do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, still, then, thus, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49824561404 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94570546236 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.4405071718 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.454545455 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0909090909 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260783101355 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990790968675 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722245639875 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162102520511 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840537533348 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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