Some high school required all student to wear school uniform other higher school permit student to decide what to wear to school.
It is compulsory for other secondary schools for children to put on school uniform, while some schools allow pupils to choose their own dress code. This essay will discuss the benefits for pupils to put on school uniform, as well as, the liberty for children to make their own decision.
Uniforms close door for social classes among high school students. Some students afford to buy quality and designer clothing which other students do not afford. This will result in discrimination among students especially those of low socio- economic status. Child descrimination increase school dropouts and lowers pupils grades, as they will loose confidence and feel out of place by seen their peers well dressed in expensive outfits.
Furthermore, uniforms makes it easy for identification of students from different schools. When a child encounters a problem or got involved in a tragedy, it is easy to identify the student and inform the respective school. Time will not be consumed roaming around trying to locate the child's parents or guardian, which can be done through the school, as the pupil would be identified by the school uniform.
However, giving liberty for high school pupils to choose what they want to put on is also a sign of promoting children's rights to choose. Apart from positives brought about by uniform, it is also human to choose what they want. Other alternatives, such as, school identification cards can be used for identification.
In conclusion, the benefits of children putting on uniform outweighs the advantages of pupils wearing the dress code of their choice. It is easier to identify children in uniform and render help quicker. It also promote good relationship among students and do away with social classes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, second, so, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19718309859 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72985216426 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556338028169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2274297552 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370355722922 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126134711624 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741334943367 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206282088073 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586694299758 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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