Some individuals feel that working from home, while of benefit to employers, is actually a drawback foe employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, working from home has become more and more prevalent all over the world due to the effect of the COVID-19 pandemic. Some people believe that working from home might put employers at disadvantage while employers gain more advantages from it. Personally, I partly agree with this opinion.
It is undoubted that working from home helps bosses cut back on costs related to maintaining working offices. In fact, companies have to spend a great deal of money on rental costs, power and water bills, office facilities, and equipment per month. Therefore, working from home means that employers could save up these costs, contributing to their higher income.
On the other hand, employees could have difficulties in working alone. Firstly, some employees, especially fresh staff, usually do not have a standard workspace. With low salaries from their entry place, they are just enough money to rent a small apartment and even work in their bed. Furthermore, as a fresh staff, they may need guidance from senior colleagues and managers or even interaction among staff to get motivated to work. Gradually, these hindrances cause pressure on them, adversely affecting their physical and mental health.
However, employers may find the management hard when their employees work from home. Through online meetings or conferences, they hardly monitor and instruct their staff to improve their productivity. In contrast, some employees, particularly senior staff who feel accustomed to their work, can gain benefits from having flexible schedules. They not only work at home but also spend time with their family, take care of their children, and have time to enjoy themselves.
In conclusion, working from brings employers more merits and fewer drawbacks than employees. Therefore, companies should listen to their staff’s opinions and adjust policies to ensure that their staff feels satisfied and motivated to work better and contribute to companies.
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- Some individuals feel that working from home while of benefit to employers is actually a drawback foe employers To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some individuals feel that working from home while of benefit to employers is actually a drawback foe employers To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39087947883 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64952829994 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618892508143 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1815756087 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3529411765 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259794598943 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937351292806 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083107655342 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160624244401 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054849985322 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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