Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society.To what extent do you agree with this view?
It is certainly true that we are surrounded by many advertisements. People use many methods to attract people for their own purposes. Nonetheless, some of these methods used to advertise can be considered inadmissible and immortal.
The biggest reason for objecting to advertisements is that they can use wrong advertising to steal property by fraud. For instance, by clicking on the mouse to advertise that you do not know can lead to a computer malfunction and by viruses steal your data. What's more, there are some scenes on the advertisement that are must not be seen on large screens, such as the use of contraceptives and tobacco, alcohol products.
Despite this, advertisements are helpful both to the producers and consumers. To the producers, they help increase the sales by letting people know about the product they sell. children and young people, in particular, are influenced by adverts showing latest gadgets, toys, and clothing.
To conclude, it is true that advertising helps the economy of workers in the internet or events. Without them, they will not get an income. Nevertheless, governments should monitor advertising with an indecent scene which has a negative impact on children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
It is certainly true that we are surroun...
^^
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...unction and by viruses steal your data. Whats more, there are some scenes on the adve...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ere are some scenes on the advertisement that are must not be seen on large scree...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eptives and tobacco, alcohol products. Despite this, advertisements are helpful...
^^^^
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...eople know about the product they sell. children and young people, in particular, are in...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'showing the latest'.
Suggestion: showing the latest
...n particular, are influenced by adverts showing latest gadgets, toys, and clothing. To concl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
nevertheless, nonetheless, so, for instance, in particular, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22680412371 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06234159079 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1398852242 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177055245757 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591948733346 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457668921903 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952487875777 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439794389393 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.