Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Humans are now living in the age of advertisement. People can experience commercials wherever they travel to. However, I believe there are some advertising methods that are unethical and inappropriate due to their exaggeration and large spread in society.
To begin with, some advertisements are immoral as they do not have genuine content. To explain, some companies aim to gain large profits regardless of negative effects buyers might suffer. As a result, despite manufacturing low-quality products, they exaggerate the quality and the importance of their merchandise to raise the profile from purchasers. This phenomenon is able to be witnessed in some online shopping apps. Although the pictures and the descriptions of some online things are attractive, the users cannot utilise the products when they buy them. Those exaggerated adverts are unethical because they are inaccurate and do harm to the buyers. The buyers can lose their money when purchasing these useless things.
Moreover, advertisements can be seen ubiquitously, which seems to be unacceptable. Adverts on the walls of some houses, on the trees, leaflets on the roads' surface may contribute to visual pollution. They may not only irritate commuters but also make a beautiful city become unattractive. Consequently, fewer visitors choose that city to go on holidays, which may lead to its slow economic development and the increase in the unemployment rate.
In conclusion, people may suffer from visual pollution and numerous unreliable advertisements and some may be aggressive when witnessing too many adverts. However, it is undeniable that advertising contributes to the economic development of all areas around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ead to its slow economic development and the increase in the unemployment rate. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52873563218 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16908500649 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.685201327 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139298099007 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454636246038 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515482335873 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085637961128 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329381502231 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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