Nowadays, although many the contemporary artists attain a great deal of money concerning what things they build, others hard to get pay from theirs invention. In this case, I intend to discuss why this could be occured and the authority must consider and put more attention to solve this matter.
It is undeniable fact that a famous painting by particular artist, for example, may can impresively expensive than the usual artist, and they gain a handsome of money from selling it. This can be occured because of several circumstances. Firstly, a famous artist is easily to join a big exhibition in order to sell their things such as paintings, sculuptures, dresses and etc. In addtion, some painter have selling-points from their painting that attract affluent people to collect their painting. However, every people deserve to achieve respect regard to their invetion and more must be create to solve this matter.
On the other hand, the authority must take a step to solve the gulf between the artist that gaining more money rather than the others. the goverment have to create a place in order to catch aspiration from all of artists concerning their invention even only talking about regulation. If the goverment create an event that for all types of artist can join. It may lead good conditions to artist selling their paint.
By the way of conclusion, although some artist attain more money from their unique paint or things, the goverment must aid to others which hard to sell their invention.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...such as paintings, sculuptures, dresses and etc. In addtion, some painter have selling-p...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ning more money rather than the others. the goverment have to create a place in ord...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, so, for example, such as, talking about, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57831480449 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6567610887 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158195131623 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652880623882 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404392820205 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110366450473 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237953541812 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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