It is often argued that numerous companies assume that their workers should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. This essay will intend to analyze both the views along with my perspective.
To commence with, wearing a proper dress workers look like professional and they serious about their work. To explain it, employees wear a proper dress they always known by customers and they look like smart also they give proper duty time to their office. They can not hiding their identity from the others people.To epitome, a survey was conducted by the Japan university found in 2016 that many workers were work efficient and giving the 100% positive result to their company. Hence, organization complete their target with through their professional workers.
On the other hand, work is the most important for any individuals. To explicate it, when the employees concentrate only on their office work they promoted by their employer and also receive many funds and bonus. They are always put their work first. Moreover, all workers works with their heart and they always honest regarding their works. To epitome, a headline published by"THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that mostly agency giving the more wages those masses who work with their sensible mind. As a result, they will receive the highly salary in the future.
To conclude, although giving a priority to their work is the good for their wealth yet i believe that wearing a smart dress employees work efficient and giving the positive vibes to their manager.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'worker'?
Suggestion: worker
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'hide'
Suggestion: hide
...duty time to their office. They can not hiding their identity from the others people.T...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r work is the good for their wealth yet i believe that wearing a smart dress empl...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'employee'?
Suggestion: employee
...et i believe that wearing a smart dress employees work efficient and giving the positive ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, look, moreover, regarding, so, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17786561265 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40281097914 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584980237154 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2477259667 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286141659825 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114075791333 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766884996899 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210290199363 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563273722607 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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