Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for and allow their children to do whatever they want is this is a good way to raise children and what consequences could this style of parents have for children as they get older
Today's society some care givers become more permissive even if enough freedom is provided through parents to their children they do not impose sufficient regulation on the offsprings and also in some since buy them too much things. However, that is wrong way to raise children and it will have repercussion impact upon them in future their essay will explore these.
To commence with, that is debatable issue says by many parents. Even through, kids have ample of liberty occasionally they do misuse of it. To elaborate, with the over exposure of freedom kinders tend to be chosse bad path and also consume illegal substance for showing modernity.Although,those ways chosen by some offsprings. Elder people seem to dope 's children than they feel scared as well as made barriers and ruler by them for their children. Victum can be stuck stable beside this cannot raise their self. To put it simplify, around one lakh of children who tend to slaves of drugs. The excess freedom is that main reason.
On the flip side, one of the wonderful pros of free-ranging parenting is that it forces kids to navigate own social atmosphere without mom and dad step away. Prepare them to swoop if anyone dares to crosse their child. However, many children boost confidence while facing trouble circumstances. Which means that children learn how to deal with by their own. Sometime, that's crucial to developing those skills prior to adulthood. For example, 24-hours news cycle means that people are now more aware of these tragedies beside this children are saffer with freedom as they become independent.
To sum up, no doubt, through strict parents children cannot boost their skills along with confidence. In contrast, some offspring do misuse of excess freedom. Because too much things is always bad in certain situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14953271028 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73506585657 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535825545171 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3662616911 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.071428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480950642506 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182796969055 0.084324248473 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12631380321 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337584793554 0.151304729494 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110034536011 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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