Some peole believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that government should make it free for all students no matter what finacial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As pursuing higher education is significantly prioritized in this day and age, the abolishment of tuition fee regardless of student’s background is believed to be necessary. While this proposal is valid to some extent, I would argue that there are quite notable drawbacks to be discussed.
There are many compelling reasons why the provision of free-of-charge education should be encouraged. In the first place, this will offer better job opportunities for bachelor’s degree holders, especially those who come from underprivileged families. Consequently, the undergraduates are able to fully concentrate on their study without being concerned about monetary issues. Furthermore, this policy will ensure a more educated workforce that contributes to the country’s prosperity.
However, tuition waivers also entail some critical disadvantages. When college degrees are widely available in society, the competition among job seekers will therefore increase, which means that those qualifications will not surely assure the graduates their desired occupations. Moreover, the budget deficiency seems probably inevitable as the government takes responsibility for the whole teaching charge. In consequence of the imbalance in the money resources, the authority will then have no choice but to increase tax as well as reduce the welfare. In the end, this will have an adverse effect on people’s life.
In conclusion, while the idea of waiving tuition fee is seemingly a good one, I believe that the government should not make college free for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71120689655 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23772893773 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681034482759 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0205741062 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158259468225 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540709906453 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409430124803 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097827332359 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322752098751 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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