Some people are born to be leaders, others believe leadership can be learnt. Discuss and give opinion.
It is true that leaders have played an indispensable role in the development of any organizations worldwide. Although some argue that leadership is innate personal traits, others, myself included, believe that the majority of leadership skills can be developed through knowledge, training and experience over time.
On the one hand, many may claim that leaders are those who were born with leadership characteristics. Firstly, it is commonly argued that they possess distinct personalities from ordinary people, such as strong self belief, intelligence and decisiveness. Obviously, a good leader can use his extraordinary critical thinking and analytical ability to come up with effective and creative strategies for any problems that arise at work. Secondly, born leaders often have the capacity to motivate, inspire and encourage people around them toward a common goal. They can quickly recognize the strengths and weaknesses of their team members to delegate responsibilities and authority in an effective way.
On the other hand, I would argue that leadership is a skill that can be developed and perfected by practice. It is apparent that the majority of important leading positions appear to have an abundance of life experiences throughout their career and a deep understanding of the core competencies in their organization, so they have a better vision for the future. Furthermore, many successful and eminent world leaders were not natural born leaders, but they have been practicing to remain curious to innovative approaches, follow their passion and understand the importance of patience and empathy with their subordinates. All this would culminate in them becoming great leadership role models for their team members.
In conclusion, while others hold the view that leadership is an innate ability, I agree with those who believe that it can be acquired for anyone that has a strong motivation to lead others."
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
...perience over time. On the one hand, many may claim that leaders are those who were b...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...delegate responsibilities and authority in an effective way. On the other hand, I would argue th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49163879599 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10466625975 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6838172183 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.833333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246073508137 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906194825268 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080652649355 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159037761801 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390974571553 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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