Capital punishment is always associated with serious crimes like rapes, murders and so on. Presently a proportion of people believe that the death penalty is good for a nation. I agree with this statement to a great extent.
There has been a tremendous increase in the rate of crimes. Governments have been trying to control such dangerous criminals however it does not seem to be controlled properly unless these criminals get any serious threat to their life if they commit a vicious crime. No matter if it’s a criminal or a terrorist, every human being has a fear of getting dead and the execution can play a great role to lower the serious crimes.
If the criminal is jailed for long years the government should afford the expenses for the prisoner and also salaries for the jail officers. Even there is always a risk if those inhumane lawbreakers can escape from jail as there are a lot of such examples. Hence, I strongly believe that the cost of government will be reduced if brutal criminals are removed from the prisons and sentenced for death. Also, there won’t be any fear of the same criminal again if done so.
To sum up, I almost completely agree that the death penalty is one of the best judicial for the criminals. It helps the individual to warn away from criminal offenses as well as helps the government in terms of financial savings. However, I would never deny saying that the judges should think hundreds of times before deciding for capital punishment to someone because it would be a great shame for the court and harm to the family if such judgment is given to any innocent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, well, as well as, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72791519435 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52320573755 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572438162544 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2191974164 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138920208008 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524790464017 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549381394231 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976769793022 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792932545948 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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