some people argue that immigrants should adopt the culture when immigrating to a new country. An altenative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss these 2 views and give your opinion.

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some people argue that immigrants should adopt the culture when immigrating to a new country. An altenative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss these 2 views and give your opinion.

In the world today, many immigrants move from the third world to developed one in order to receive the more qualitative life. It is highly debated that whether they should accept the host country’s culture or does they create their own society. Both situations have pros & cons which I will discuss in this essay.
There are many benefits for following new culture. Firstly, imitation new custom prevent isolation in a strange country. For example, when Asian citizens transfer to West countries, they have to speak local language. It will be hard to communicate with another people, If they continue speaking their mother language. It helps them to integrate with people. Besides, immigrants could not only improve the proficiency of new language but also get more experience for their life. Increasing interaction with the local, especially in workplace, offer a good practice for a new comer. We can have a qualitative life as the same as we wish.
On the other hand, some people believe that they should keep their culture instead of forget it. By the way, they create an association of countryman of maintaining their traditional values as well as patriotism to their motherland. Furthermore, it also brings for the host country a new color. It looks like Singapore which has many different cultures such as China, Vietnam and England.
In conclusion, each idea owns a meaning. However, in my opinion, we should adopt the custom, when we live in there. Besides we can keep a partly of their traditional values to show patriotism.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: DOES_YOU[2]
Message: Did you mean 'do'? 'does' is only used for the third person singular (he/she/it).
Suggestion: do
...cept the host country's culture or does they create their own society. Both sit...
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Line 2, column 571, Rule ID: NEW_COMER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newcomer'?
Suggestion: newcomer
... workplace, offer a good practice for a new comer. We can have a qualitative life as the ...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...olor. It looks like Singapore which has many different cultures such as China, Vietnam and Eng...
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Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...dopt the custom, when we live in there. Besides we can keep a partly of their tradition...
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Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... traditional values to show patriotism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, third, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, by the way, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06274509804 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74786571564 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0040971989 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.7222222222 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202512741807 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561404225639 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379610250868 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112547408044 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215779750705 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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