Some people argue that it is better to be unemployed than to be employed in jobs they do not enjoy.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent times, employment has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern for the pernicious effects associated with it. Some people are of the fervent conviction that unemployment is better than working job what they do not like. In my opinion, I totally agree this view.
Admittedly, a discontented job can bring various merits such as some money for a living. However, its cost are much higher compared to benefits. On one hand, it is obvious that working attitude is negatively affected if we have to do the job what we are not fond. No one wants to devote all his heart to a job what he hates, which resulted in not only below-standard working quality but also bad mental health. Moreover, keeping doing a job what we do not like prevent us from opportunities that our beloved careers offer. For example, if you accidently find a job that you like and want to change post instantly, but the law say that you have to notice the human resources manager one month in advance, the golden chance may pass by right in front of your face.
On the other hand, being unemployed temporarily may bring about chances to do some amazing things that can even change your life. One high school of mine provides an attractive story about his life as an example. After graduation, he got accepted to become an officer. However, the job was so boring that he decided to quit after 3 months and started to learn photography, which has been always dreaming of since he was a little boy. He spent all savings to buy DSLC camera, registered a photography courses, became a freelancer and spent all time to travel and take pictures of stunt sceneries. Until now, he got some local and international prizes for his creative work, and became a full-time photographer with high salary.
In conclusion, it is possibly senseless to convey the idea that working jobs what we do not like is superior to become unemployment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 664, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6994047619 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65940064248 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5427028444 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258302371481 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08089647488 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101518523426 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164264140592 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750299026924 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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