Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, people have had different views about whether or not they should get jobs with high salaries. Although there are some advantages of such jobs, I personally believe that people should take jobs giving them more job satisfaction.
There are some arguments for finding jobs with decent salaries. First of all, the living cost nowadays is very expensive. This requires people to get jobs offering high salaries which enables them to pay mortages, bills and buy food. Secondly, if people earn a lot of money, they can purchase whatever they want. For instance, they will take expensive holidays, eat in five-star restaurants, or drive luxury cars like Bugatti Veyron or pagani zonda. Finally, those people can ensure that their children will receive high quality education and medical care which help them prepare better for their future life.
However, I also will argue that people should have enjoyable jobs. The main reason is that if they get jobs suiting to their character and ambitions, they will work hard and express their creativity at work. Therefore, they can have the opportunity to get promoted or increase their salaries. Another reason is that when people take jobs with high salaries, they have to spend eight and more hours each day doing such jobs. They are forced to reduce their time spent on communicating with their family members, for example, around a dinner table. This may ruin their family relationship. Also, long work hours can lead to many mental health problems such as stress or depression. At the same time, peple are likely to use alcohol and tobacco more to focus on working, these undesirable habits may result in lung cancer and other heart diseases.
In conclusion, despite the advantages of taking jobs with decent salaries, it seems to me that we should get jobs giving us more job satisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
..., people have had different views about whether or not they should get jobs with high salaries...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03571428571 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40602379405 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8493613585 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2352941176 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186059774096 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633536444669 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508230139592 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126066403566 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283566235195 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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