Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Other disagree and think that a good salary leads to better life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Undoubtedly, most of the people are just eager to have blue collar job which caters handsome wages to an employee. However, other are exclusively in the favour of job which makes themselves happy and enjoyable. I think both the styles of working brings merits and demerits which would be discussed below.
There is no any stress and burden of working just because of the interesting job. People are doing jobs according to their wish while, nothing is set any types of limits for them such as starting and finishing time for their work. However, those people who prefer to the high salary job they take a lot of pressure related to their work because if, they choose a advanced jobs then definitely follow the rules and regulations of the company and due to this, it is a huge burden on their brain.
Moving to other side, its secure future. They do not scared about their future because enough money earning by them and not only save their future but also their family members. If person would be retired then he does not take pension about the money and he spend his all life with a sophisticated way with family while, a person lives for present. Admittedly, people are satisfied from their job and earn money their present time but, in the coming days they do not do anything and sometimes dependent on others.
To sum up, it depends on persons needs and circumstances whether he is going to choose enjoyable jobs or salary jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, while, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65748031496 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34012317034 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602362204724 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6953044892 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.545454545 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166686568675 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065080858751 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026653569406 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101616689797 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284653229505 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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