Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent decades, the topic of whether job satisfaction is more important than job security or not has gained traction among the public. While some believe that attaining a permanent job should be the end goal, I argue that workers should champion job satisfaction.
There are several benefits of seeking for job security. First, it is clear that landing a permanent job could be the safe way to ensure stable incomes for employees who are susceptible to the fast changes in the labor market. For example, during the retrenchment time, workers who have signed permanent employment contracts may have not to face the risk of being unemployed, which means their income is still warranted. Another benefit of earning a long-term position in work is that the people doing so do not have to change their working environment regularly. This means that they do not need to change themselves in order to adapt new requirements in different duties, which saves their time and effort.
Given that, attaining job satisfaction can be more beneficial in certain extents. The most essential advantage is that being satisfied can facilitate the process of working. There has been a universally acknowledgement that when workers in a good mood they tend to work with more energy and concentration, which not only boosts productivity and efficiency but also mitigates stress that may ruin worker’s desire to commit more. In addition, changing positions in work and learning how to adapt with new challenges arms workers with the abilities of dealing different circumstances. This conditions them to survive in a fast-paced environment in which employees encounter the high rate of being fired if they show no signs of adaptation.
In conclusion, although landing a permanent job has some tangible benefit, job satisfaction in my standpoints has more impact as far as labor workforce as a whole and individual workers are concerned.
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- Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction and a permanent job is more important Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction and a permanent job is more important Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('universally') instead an adjective, or a noun ('acknowledgement') instead of another adjective.
... the process of working. There has been a universally acknowledgement that when workers in a good mood they t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1961414791 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94716591902 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581993569132 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8412077194 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.307692308 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302311101692 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115654817863 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124794090214 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231660797099 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149422852829 0.056905535591 263% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.