Nowadays many people believe that sport makes world more peaceful. This agrees that sport activities, such as The Olympic games encourage worldwide peace and makes the world better place to live. Firstly the essay will discuss the fact, that The Olympic games stopped a conflicts and wars and secondly the power to put society although the world together in the one time.
Since the ancient age, people have been thrilled watching outstanding athletes to comped at Olympic games. Since the first ones in 345 BC societies passed this amazing Greek's heritage from one to another. Moreover, people around the world in later age enjoyed watching their nation sport performers trying to break personal, national or world record in believe to bring any of three precious medals as an award. The prime example is The Czech republic, during The Olympic games in 1998, in Nagano, Japan, national ice hockey team brought together whole Czech population. People woke up early morning due to the time difference and on town squares, pubs even at workplace tensely watched their national team to win a gold medal.
Last but not least, The Olympic games have an incredible power to stop any weapon conflicts and wars. Since the first modern Olympic games at the begging of eighteenth century, all conflicts and wars around the world stopped for two weeks. One clear example is The second World War, which is written into the world's memory forever. However, during The Olympic games in 1944, German army forces as well as others stopped fighting.
To sum up, sport activities brings people together as well as encourage individuals to perform better than anybody else. In my opinion, sport has the strongest power to make world better and should be promoted as the weapon for worldwide peace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng athletes to comped at Olympic games. Since the first ones in 345 BC societies pass...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...nd World War, which is written into the worlds memory forever. However, during The Oly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03716216216 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26533559176 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584459459459 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2790348183 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15264651858 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593659900245 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052923988833 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105190846902 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044308975959 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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