Some people become more prejudiced and less open-minded when they travel abroad.
Why might this happen?
What can be done to reduce this?
new Roman',serif;color:#000000;background-color:transparent;font-weight:400;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre;white-space:pre-wrap;">it is true that many people ought to face some adverse problems when they go on overseas trips. this essay will discuss the reasons behind this phenomenon and then offer some feasible solutions to it.
new Roman',serif;color:#000000;background-color:transparent;font-weight:400;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre;white-space:pre-wrap;">there are a number of factors responsible for why visitors return from a foreign country with a negative attitude. Chief among these is that some tourists may experience criminal problems when they enter a new country. In fact, thieves in almost countries consider foreigners as easy targets, which can be exemplified in some large cities such as Barcelona, where tourists are frequently warned about pickpocketing in crowded places. Another reason is that several foreign visitors lack knowledge of local prices. So that some local people will take advantage of this, thereby trying to overcharge them as much as possible. such activities cause a sense of negative feelings, which discourages tourists from returning to a country.
new Roman',serif;color:#000000;background-color:transparent;font-weight:400;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre;white-space:pre-wrap;">Various measures, nevertheless, can be adopted to tackle the situation. The first possible approach is that the governments should strengthen their anti-theft policies to protect foreign tourists. For example, they increase the presence of police at tourist attractions and put more notices there, which means that visitors can be informed about the possible dangers around. Regarding the problem of overcharging, the authorities must ensure that all prices are clearly marked, which helps foreigners estimate the amount of money they have to pay for something. A case in point is that in Vietnam, where taxi fares are always clearly shown and calculated by an electronic device installed in each car.
new Roman',serif;color:#000000;background-color:transparent;font-weight:400;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre;white-space:pre-wrap;">In conclusion, the fact that there are several adverse attitudes that tourists may adopt after traveling to a new place can stem from many causes. However, steps can be taken to ameliorate the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2386.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.03367003367 5.12529762239 157% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 22.8383076426 2.80592935109 814% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 680.4 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.3 1.60771543086 143% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.339999754 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.066666667 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113126046964 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506684678803 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472305865211 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084616506368 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280161112335 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.3 13.0946893788 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.03 50.2224549098 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.0 11.3001002004 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 29.29 12.4159519038 236% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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