Some people belie that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinions?
These days, human are being progressively replaced by artificial intelligent robots in the workshop. Thought it is possible that all the physicals, unskilled works will require a machine, it is impossible to perform work those deals with precise skilled and human feelings. This essay will demonstrate only minor work will be performed by human being.
Eventually, all the works that does not need any specific knowledge but only require labour will be mechanized by the android.
Many factories and companies believed that if those menial jobs are dined by the automatic machine, it could save both time and money rather than spending upon hiring, training and employing human. In restaurants in Nepal, for instance, many waiters and cashiers have being replaced by artificial machines that consume less money. Furthermore, those artificial robots can work all day and night without any rest and salary, so that human labour will be changed with robotic intelligence, if only it doesn't need any sort of skilled to perform work.
On the contrary, there are certain jobs that can not be replaced by robots because manmade robots can never reach to real human's brain.In simple way, to do such as doctor, medicines and social work, ones must have both skilled and emotions, which is absence in artificial robots. Unless, those works are not done by skilled human, it cannot be satisfied. Hence, robots will never be able to achieve those skills of human which has existed in human's brain.
Highly sophisticated, complex works will always need human skills, however unskilled will eventually complete by robots. For these reason only few work will be available for human in today's world. It is most likely that machine will continue its employment by replacing human in most works.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, for instance, sort of, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18965517241 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52163999256 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5876547271 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1977849944 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088052339724 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348569320427 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126615422291 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159742043106 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.