Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that is it important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In this present era of modernization, where competition has increased at global levels, there is a need for an experienced, supportive, confident, and intelligent workforce. It is often believed that the upcoming generation should be given full liberty to take their day to day decisions right from childhood, while many others argue stating that freedom of decision at an early age produces selfish individuals. Although decision-making is an indispensable attribute that reflects one's confidence in handling major projects efficiently and independently, early age is a crucial building stage where proper guidance and experience of parents can not be overlooked. This essay will emphasize on various factors showing how both the aspects are beneficial for the betterment of society.
It is an irrefutable fact that children are the future of every country and investing in them in the context of quality education, basic needs, and essential characteristics is extremely important. It is usually suggested that upbringing plays a vital role in teaching valuable life etiquettes. For example, learning to decide on daily basic needs such as clothing options, study time, and food choice gives them a sense of independent decision making. Hence, tackling one's own small issues from childhood acts as a strong pillar for the future's life-changing decisions.
On the contrary, a part of society also focuses on the negative impact of early freedom of thoughts. Leaving everything on the wish of kids can result in an increase in tantrums and more choosy behavior. For instance, it can be seen that kids belonging to families where they are equipped with all their needs as per their choice are more self-centered and narcissistic, compared to kids who achieve everything knowing the value of effort and money. So, while teaching them a sense of independence, sense of gratitude and compassion gets lost somewhere.
To conclude, it is an undeniable fact that children being the key to success and development should be valued and taught needed life skills. Though the opinion related to kids' freedom in deciding for their needs may vary among various masses. I believe that a sensible and balanced approach opted by families can go a long way in developing a decisive mind, still managing the value of co-operation, adjustment and group sharing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 484, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...n indispensable attribute that reflects ones confidence in handling major projects e...
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Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'kid'.
Suggestion: kid
...e skills. Though the opinion related to kids freedom in deciding for their needs may...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, still, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33780160858 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01920006033 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613941018767 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8683272329 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.733333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8666666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118992728222 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336080634666 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293142843282 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672830539004 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155361362834 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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