There is a common are of debate among parents about whether should we allow children to
make their own choices on everyday matters or not. According to some people, children
should be allowed to decide what they should eat, wear or watch. However, others believe
that if children have the freedom to make their own choices, they will grow up into selfish
individuals. In my opinion, children definitely have the right to make their own choices on
everyday matters, but since they are too young to know what is good or bad for them so
parents should help them in making the right decisions.
Firstly, decisions making is a really important skill for children to drive their life to sucess.
The most important things is they have to know how to make the right choice about their
lifestyle and future career. When they can make their own choices, they will be able to learn
how to take the responsibility for their things. Needless to say, dealing with problems as a
child can turn them into a problem-solving master in the future.
Secondly, when they have their own freedom, they might not consider the feeling of the
others. For example, if they want a new toy and tell their parents to buy it for them, if their
parents allow them to have their way all the way, they will not consider the economic
situation of their parents. Then they will definitely grow into a selfish person who does not
care for others. Therefore, the most important thing is parents have to set the limit of the
freedom that the children can have.
In conclusion, in order to prevent children from being selfish, i believe that parents should
teach them how to respect the feelings of others instead of prohibiting them from making
their own choice about their lifestyles because they have rights to do it.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important 56
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important 67
- The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables sugars and sweets and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 65, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to prevent children from being selfish, i believe that parents should teach them...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79617834395 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35686864516 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484076433121 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.115259288 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.846153846 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277065532276 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125337995136 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779708915357 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103055701561 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788923025693 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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