Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choice on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
A common held view is that children should be restricted about making decisions because it will results in developing anti-sociable behavior and when they become adult, they would insist on their tendency without caring about others. Despite the fact that there are some sympathy about this idea, I am completely disagree with this theory for couple of reasons which I will discuss through following paragraphs.
First of all, it is noteworthy that making decision is one of the most important skills that children should learn during childhood years to be able to earn enough congestion on life matters and recognize the difference between good and bad. By this I mean, when children are able to choose what they want, for example their favorite food or color, they would learn how to be independent-minded. Definitely, it is extremely essential to teach them how to think and make their mind map before making decision. In fact, parents play a key role in this process and they are the first and the main responsible who should train them the logical thinking skills. When children provide with enough information about the benefits and drawbacks of each choice, they will learn how to make decision and after a while, they would apply this method when facing complicated problems.
On the other hand, in order to avoid ant-sociable behavior, there should be some educational programs and lifestyle training which encourage children to group life and promote their attitude toward life and help them to broad their outlook of society as a member.
Another reason why I tend to disagree with this idea, is about parent’s impact on the children. When parent used to interfere into the primary decisions of infants, they never get enough self-confidence. In other words, they used to be dictated and never consider any rights for themselves, which brings lots of psychological concerns.
Taking everything into consideration, it seems to me that parent should teach their children how to make intelligent decisions by allowing them to choose their tendency in routine and daily matters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, while, for example, i mean, in fact, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17302052786 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7474703808 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551319648094 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8600939678 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4166666667 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164709729221 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662008727532 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422194153219 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101731215303 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343356070288 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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