some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters is likely to result isn asociety of individuals who only think about their own wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make dicisions about matters that affect them.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many assumption in adults that relying kids to select they desire in variant stuff would grow them to have a selfish and rigid own willingness. Yet, other against to this argument and convinced that have the independent choice is better to produce the impact. In this content, I will state in two side viewpoints.
Obviously, giving a freedom option to the children has a downside, especially to them who have the young age. Commonly in that phase, kids have not considered maturely yet about anything, unless the simple daily needs. Yet, a couple of parents frequently do this. There are large impact from this habituation, for instance the children would generalise their parents’ treatment to other people. So that, they would feel dominant and are not giving another chance to someone else, because they think they are the only executor. Regardless this kind of attitude are not accepted in a wider society.
Although many people have strongly confession over the detrimental, other reject by several consideration. Children have to habituate for making the decision up as long this is the wise matter to take. Older team would do the effort to keep their kids refusing a dependent behaviour. To illustrate, the pupils guardian in the school often confess that they always educate their sons and daughters to have a leadership skill. In minimum, conniving them to lead their opinion even in a detail things. Furthermore, it also rise a self-confidence inside.
To sum up, I stand to the concern of supplying freedom to the children because the advantage would be felt in the future, despite there is a little tendency become an egoist.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun consideration seems to be countable; consider using: 'several considerations'.
Suggestion: several considerations
...n over the detrimental, other reject by several consideration. Children have to habituate for making ...
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Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rises'?
Suggestion: rises
...n a detail things. Furthermore, it also rise a self-confidence inside. To sum up, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so, for instance, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05860805861 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73757023891 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4929359603 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167183518668 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467003841124 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412864190998 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865690019974 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462223957177 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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