Some people believe that the art is essential subject for the children but other people are beleive that it is the waste of time. Explain the both side and give opinion.
" the purpose of the art os washing the dust of daily life of our souls". In the world every child is an artist. The problem is how to remain an artist once we grow up. In the same manner with, the essay declare that should art is the important subject for children or not? Through this essay, I will explain the all topic from the both point in following subsections.
The first paragraph of the topic, the people who believe that art is important subject for the children? Broadly speaking, there are two main reasons behind this. The first and foremost reason for this the hidden talent. However, through the art activities in schools disclosed the talent of the children. Tge children have best way to choose there vision of the future. Therefore, the artdefine in many ways like: singing, sports, and dance. As well as, it also help the children to enhance the skills such as; personal skills, and so on. In addition to this, the second main reason for this the importance of art in schools that is profession. Whereas, the children choose the art according to their interest. Apart from this, they make a profession of their interest. Because the every people is do better is they interested in activities.
Further, the second paragraph consider the people who believe that the art is totally waste of time? In this paragraph basically two main causes. The first is the extra burden. Therefore, the parents are thinkthat the art classes in the schools are burden on the head of children. However, the art activities ate good for the children. But the perception of the parents the art is a load for the children. In addition to this, the second reason that is the preception of parents the academinc performance are effected. Moving forward, the children show less interest in the study and art activities distracted the children from their career. According to parents the art cannot provide the good opportunity for the career.
Concluding, what I above said, I believe that the parents and schools not pressurised the children for the extra curriculum activities. Children should follow their interest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the best'.
Suggestion: have the best
...he talent of the children. Tge children have best way to choose there vision of the futur...
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Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
... sports, and dance. As well as, it also help the children to enhance the skills such...
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Line 3, column 647, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e of art in schools that is profession. Whereas, the children choose the art according ...
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Line 3, column 772, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ey make a profession of their interest. Because the every people is do better is they i...
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Line 3, column 800, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...r interest. Because the every people is do better is they interested in activities...
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Line 5, column 656, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'parent'.
Suggestion: parent
...hildren from their career. According to parents the art cannot provide the good opportu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, broadly speaking, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90581717452 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55690824824 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476454293629 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 15.0 2.52805611222 593% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0532675789 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.5925925926 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3703703704 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85185185185 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265021698307 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749604208374 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078631776065 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1601297534 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471638271372 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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