Some people believe that the arts should receive subsidies or sponsorship from government and big companies. Others feel such spending is a luxury and that it would be better if it were invested in scientific projects.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Arts and science are indispensable in every person’s life and society because of their enormous contribution to the development of national culture and economy. For this reason, there has been dividing opinions regarding whether the sponsorship should be given to arts or science. In this essay, I will discuss these two views and decide which field deserves to get financial aid from the Government.
First of all, arts has an integral part in enriching our lives and national culture by providing numerous forms of entertainment to the society (for example, music and poetry). With the help of a colossal number of historical artworks, many archaeologists could discover more about our ancestors and past events. Additionally, by encouraging amateur arts groups, they can nourish potential talents and bring them together. These young artists then can join a local group and perform on stage to serve media work and spread values of arts to the public. However, we cannot deny the fact that arts currently contributes too little to the national economy. According to reports done by statisticians, trading technological or scientific products produces a far larger profit than artworks do. Thus, to help the economy advance consistently, investing in the arts is not ideal.
In terms of science, this field, undeniably, has been of great importance recently. Social living standards are always on the rise thank to continuous scientific advances. Moreover, the strength and the wealth of a nation are associated with the development and sophistication of science. A modern economy, therefore, cannot thrive without a strong scientific base. A good example for this is that several developed countries including the US and Russia can produce COVID-19 vaccines and sell it worldwide. This invention is truly an incredible success that not all countries could achieve.
To sum up, arts and science are both meaningful and essential to the society, and if I were in the Government position, I would divide the financial aid equally to these two core fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30182926829 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92225092878 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.209843968 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.294117647 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121296132776 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342271425335 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358073791932 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792143937828 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040214543981 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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