Some people believe that to be successful at a sport, you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Some individuals think to be successful in a sport people require natural ability. However, others opine that working hard and doing practice makes a person successful. I will discuss both the points of views and give my opinion.
To begin with, children have some hidden talents when they are born. Some children are good in managing things, while some do their best in sports by playing and winning in various sporting events. For example, Sachin Tendulkar was a famous cricketer, and he already showed his skills and abilities in cricket when he was just four years old. He consistently performed well in people, but hard work is the key to become successful in sports.
However, there are many skills that people can improve by practice. If they make any mistake while playing any sport, they work hard constantly to turn their weaknesses into strengths. For example, Cristiano Ronaldo, the footballer, was not good when he started his career. He works hard to improve his skills, and he learns many techniques by practicing hard in ground. In my opinion, almost every sport requires practice and hard work because there are certain new skills that are difficult to learn.
In conclusion, although some people are born with good sporting spirits which help them in sports, I believe that constant practice and hard work is the most important factor to perform well in sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03896103896 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45888208035 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601731601732 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.466829511 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5384615385 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323389870311 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11789802556 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801487436515 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225472036822 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146547895816 0.056905535591 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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