Some people believe that the best way to increase road safety is increasing the minimum legal age for driving cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that the feasible solution to enhance road safety is raising the legal driving age. I partially agree with this statement for the following reasons.
On the one hand, increasing the minimum legal age for driving car brings about at least two advantages to be mentioned. One of the main benefits is that the collisions rate caused by teenagers' reckless driving is more likely be lessened. This is because people who is in their twenties or thirties tend to have better awareness of traffic regulations, for example, avoiding drink - driving or driving in a wrong line. In addition, teenagers have more time to sharpen their skills to react to unexpected circumstances occurred on the road by participating in defensive driving course. This leads to minimizing a number of would-be traffic offenders which is on the rise in the past few years.
On the other hand, there are some considerable drawbacks. The primary reason is that nowadays, parents are usually occupied with their hectic schedules. As a result, children have to take driving by themselves to school or other education centers. If this law is imposed by the government, these young adults will not have the ability to commute independently and always have to rely on others who are able to get a driving license. Consequently, it is inconvenient and time-consuming. Another bad point is, students from unprivileged families need a driving license to make a living. As a matter of fact, many young adults work for Grab-bike service to earn money to prevent their parents suffer from financial burdens. Compared to being a waiter or security guard, working as a driver is a better option. They have flexible time and can receive more tips during the day.
In conclusion, I hold the view that both are true to a certain extent. There should be various solutions taken at the same time to deal with this problem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95597484277 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78148122557 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0258303191 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5555555556 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194832857048 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054557216147 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768750516555 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124679787051 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922497970277 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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