Some people believe that children who are brought up in families which don't have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up in wealthier families. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
life does not have only happiness, sometimes, we are get into troubles which are terrible with us. some thinks some bad situation in life like an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money, accepting them is a good way. however, others believe we should try to solve.
On the one hand, knowing how to be acquainted with bad situations is good for us in some ways. In fact, there are a lot of things which we don’t like. however, most of them are necessary. For example, when we have a job which we need work hard with low salary and condition. some will give up, unfortunately, many can not do that. Whereas, they have no other better choices, they need earn their livings so they have to work harder and harder.
On the other hand, we are not able to always endure everything. sometimes, we need to do something to make our life better and more comfortable. For instances, when we are short of money to buy a good shoes, we should try to work and earn more money instead of buying a bad shoes.
To conclude, accepting bad things or trying to make them better is depends on our own ways. life is not fair so everyone need make efforts to have a better life. Personally, I will look on bright side and improve every bad circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51101321586 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54967530969 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546255506608 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5309881711 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.2666666667 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146554275431 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527546698071 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379432349868 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945816457363 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032503172869 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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