Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
By speeding up the technology gears and getting lost in modern world, we should consider our children's life and keep them safe by proper upbringing. I think devoting majority of our time to our children is more important than other things in personal life, because, we are responsible.
children construct the future generations and obviously they will occupy important job positions in near future. thinking about their personality and helping them to figure their personality as well as possible is very important. All around the world majority of children attend in classes in order to get education. Apart from the educational life of children, their free times are important as well. By producing appropriate educational hobbies for children, they would be able to learn for example, group working, the bond between them as a friend get stronger, they become more creative and they would have self-rounded personality in school, among family members and society.
aimless leisure for example, make children more dull, sometimes they have troubles with their friends, they become nervous and argue with their friends and of course it affects their life. As far as I'm concerned, sometimes, it is necessary that our children have aimless free times. For example, they need to chill out by making mistakes, because always doing educational leisure would make them tired. Therefore, playing a computer game for a long time or making the kitchen floor dirty by flour and cacao powder is acceptable i think.
All in all, I agree with the statement, but, sometimes, we should let children have aimless leisure in order to make mistakes, be aware of the results of making mistakes and think about them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, i think, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19855595668 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62714702624 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570397111913 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2532602028 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136377187549 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541342596936 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309492020572 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836680985185 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307236212495 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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