Some people believe that climate change could have a negative effect on business. Other think that this can create more business opportunities.
People have different views about climate change has negative impact on business. While some think that it ought to create many possibility to business. I side that with who argue that they advocate that change in climate produces more work. Needless to say, an imperative perspective in favor of a rotating atmosphere increases business. To quote an instance, whenever weather is changed people like to buy new stuff such as clothes, utensils and other essentials according to their requirement. Consequently, people are inventing new innovations according to weather which creates new jobs and increases business.
Furthermore, during the summer season, individuals like to visit cold places and want to eat child edibles. On the contrary in winter natives love to take a bath which is a new concept these days people spend a hefty amount on this which is also a part of the growing business.
Nevertheless, protagonists who espouse that interchanging weather could have a bad impact on work claim that people who are doing hosiery business invest a hefty amount in their work but after changing climate the whole stock got waste which has a bad impact on business because they did not get their money back from left stock.
In my final analysis, some people think it grows the business others think it has side effects.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- Today s children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past To what extent do you agree or disagree 82
- Some people believe that climate change could have a negative effect on business Other think that this can create more business opportunities 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...change has negative impact on business. While some think that it ought to create man...
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Suggestion:
...e has negative impact on business. While some think that it ought to create many ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun possibility seems to be countable; consider using: 'many possibilities'.
Suggestion: many possibilities
...ile some think that it ought to create many possibility to business. I side that with who argu...
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...any possibility to business. I side that with who argue that they advocate that c...
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Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...sibility to business. I side that with who argue that they advocate that change in...
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Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...ncreases business. Furthermore, during the summer season, individuals like to visit cold places ...
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...ontrary in winter natives love to take a bath which is a new concept these days p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, while, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05479452055 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67393611024 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611872146119 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.477651728 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.7 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298324006514 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110711482681 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864868045969 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172324942302 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877685572084 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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