Some people believe that climate has greatest effect on people's way of living. Other believes that economy of the region has a greatest effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Many individuals think that people's living style has affected greatly by climate. Some thinks that the area's economic value effects it more. This is because they have to choose occupation according to the climate, on the other hand, economy leads to the growth of population.
Firstly, people have to do work according to the atmosphere in their region. In hot regions farmers yield crops which grows in hot temperature whereas it varies in humid, dry and cold weathers. In some humid areas, people grow crops which need less water. For example, Rajasthan, the desert area, where shortage of water is a scary problem people have to grow plants like cactus is easy to grow without water.
Secondly, people's living style also depends upon the economy of that particular area. This is because it can help population to grow economically. If an economical area allows better facilities to the public living their likewise, better education, hospitality sector. While, the economy is helping them for their well-being the people will become more developed. As the government give free education and other accessories the parents can deposit money for child's better future. For instance, in foreign countries government pays the expenses for a child's well-being up to a specific age to maintain a style of children.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with both the views mentioned because of the dependability on climate to choose job and to grow economical respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 506, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...better future. For instance, in foreign countries government pays the expenses for a chil...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
... the dependability on climate to choose job and to grow economical respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21518987342 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71158032182 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9471593028 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2857142857 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185600400089 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657301456794 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427675951572 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106108495405 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271799745685 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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