crime is become dangerous concern of global so many individuals think that main reason of crime is social problems and poverty ,others people believe that bad nature of person is the principal cause of crime and my opinion is main reasons of crime are both poverty and bad nature.
On the one hand people thinks that social problems and poverty are the main cause of violation because some people commit the crime due to their financial and social problems hence criminals commit the some minor crimes to cater needs of their own and family moreover ,In modern eraa everyone try to buy expensive things and also follow the showoff of trend so people attempt some small types of crimes.
Opponents on the other hand argue that bad behavior of people are reason of crime because some individuals become criminals due to their background because someone belong to criminal family soo automatically they become guilty and furthermore, the judicial system give wrong punishment to somebody therefore, due to wrong punishment and they commit crimes again and again and become bad person of society.
Finally, my opinion,both social problems and bad behavior are the cause of increasing crime because poverty rate is very high in some countries so crime is high in poor nations for example india is developing country soo that the rate of poor people are very high and crime rate is also high and some masses do crime due to their bad behaviour like some people are psychopath so they commit crime without any reason and become very dangerous member of society.
To wrap up, crime is very dangerous for world soo this important to solve this issue .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Crime
crime is become dangerous concern of global s...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... of crime is social problems and poverty ,others people believe that bad nature of...
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ial problems hence criminals commit the some minor crimes to cater needs of their ow...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r needs of their own and family moreover ,In modern eraa everyone try to buy expen...
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'belongs'.
Suggestion: belongs
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , both
...person of society. Finally, my opinion,both social problems and bad behavior are th...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d soo this important to solve this issue .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, hence, moreover, so, therefore, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89964157706 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34596646896 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440860215054 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.043873415 49.4020404114 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 273.4 106.682146367 256% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.8 20.7667163134 269% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.0 7.06120827912 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405478440563 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.234384753479 0.084324248473 278% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127291883744 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234384753479 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127291883744 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.5 13.0946893788 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 50.2224549098 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 9.78957915832 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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