In the few decades, the development of private hospitals has caused a big argument about whether they are too commercial. Although there are some benefits, there are still some drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are some advantages of confidential hospitals. Private clinics can share responsibilities with public ones in taking care of the public's health. This helps reduce the pressure on overload of either patients or finance. Besides, profit-oriented healthcare can afford the mental demand of people. For instance, patients can receive the convenience and satisfaction of the service if they choose a private hospital for treatment.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of profit-making companies in healthcare. The expenditures there is higher than in state-owned hospitals. This contributes to the gap between the rich and the poor, which exacerbate social inequality. Moreover, it is difficult for the government to manage the treatment process in private hospitals. This leads to uncertainty in not only the costs but also the medication.
In conclusion, the advantages cannot recoup the disadvantages that private healthcare can cause. This makes people have to think more carefully in choosing a suitable hospital for them.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
... with public ones in taking care of the publics health. This helps reduce the pressure ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59162303665 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18675750114 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.6121838433 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.2857142857 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6428571429 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0633359188034 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240769128717 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030270019323 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0418565619403 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185049943732 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.55 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
... with public ones in taking care of the publics health. This helps reduce the pressure ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59162303665 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18675750114 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.6121838433 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.2857142857 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6428571429 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0633359188034 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240769128717 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030270019323 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0418565619403 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185049943732 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.55 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.