Some people argue that researching outer space remains crucial since it provides considerable insights and could subject to numerous innovations that will aid human beings in the course of time. Others claim that investigating space is unfruitful. Hence, capital ought to be laid out in tackling a urgent issue like global warming. In my opinion, both warming and space exploration must be accepted equally as the key importance. This essay will support my opinion with relevant examples.
To begin with, thanks to the space study, satellites are proved to be one of the best blessings for the human kinds in the worldwide. With the application of spacecrafts, meteorologists can readily monitor and discover the weather and atmosphere. Typhoons would be a best example. In early nineties in Bangladesh, ferocious storm burst in a village where nearly two thirds of the citizens in the village succumbed to deaths whereas recently, people in the same locality were moved to a safe place before the occurrence of disaster owing to the utilisation of space stations, which became just possible because of the space investigation. Otherwise not only would catastrophic sequences of cyclones take premature lives of people but also it could wreck the healthy economy of a nation. Therefore, it ascertains why space probe sounds true worths for human beings.
Besides, it is worth stressing that global warming, which is one of the pressing troubles, needs to be addressed too because it is growing in astounding ways. For example, the world is gradually broiling due to a continuous surge in the temperature, icebergs are melting and the significant proportion of places is having prolonged drought. Therefore, wealth should be drained to build renewable energy sources like solar power, wind power and hydro power as these kinds of energy promote to decrease the carbon dioxide that usually represents as a major contributor of global warming. If government concentrated the budget for tackling the above mentioned critical mess, the world would become sustainable for inhabitants in the future.
In conclusion, exploring space and dealing paramount obstacles prove eminently worthwhile because of the accurate
estimation of climate changes and drop in carbon footprints.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
1. As we told before, need at least two reasons for one paragraph. while in the second paragraph, only one reason is given. and the example is too long:
Typhoons would be a best example. In early nineties in Bangladesh, ferocious storm burst in a village where nearly two thirds of the citizens in the village succumbed to deaths whereas recently, people in the same locality were moved to a safe place before the occurrence of disaster owing to the utilisation of space stations, which became just possible because of the space investigation. Otherwise not only would catastrophic sequences of cyclones take premature lives of people but also it could wreck the healthy economy of a nation.
we may give another reason like: it will be used to find new energy. for example, there are some new elements in the moon or out space, but they are not readily available in the earth.
2. in the third paragraph, globe warming is actually not the immediate problem here on Earth. immediate problems are something like poverty, hunger, diseases, war, pollution...
3. In next essays, you are asked to follow this pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: idea one. first, example 1.....second....example 2
para 3: however, idea two. first, example 1 ...second...example 2
para 4: in my opinion...
examples should be short, one or two sentences are enough.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 357 350
No. of Characters: 1875 1500
No. of Different Words: 219 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.347 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.252 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.788 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.312 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.771 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.688 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.285 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.489 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.018 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...apital ought to be laid out in tackling a urgent issue like global warming. In my...
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Line 1, column 400, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
... and space exploration must be accepted equally as the key importance. This essay will sup...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ather and atmosphere. Typhoons would be a best example. In early nineties in Bang...
^
Line 3, column 639, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...ble because of the space investigation. Otherwise not only would catastrophic sequences o...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ently worthwhile because of the accurate estimation of climate changes and drop i...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, therefore, third, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39215686275 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88283336543 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621848739496 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.925201932 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.3125 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249212105217 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722170304209 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622481513365 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119457004967 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919905423984 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.