Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.
In the past, most people preferred only direct communication,at present, every human communicate via various media like telephone,e-mails and other social media.As a result,this pattern increases day by day and people forget the real value of face to face communication.I agree with the suggestions that face to face communication is better than written communication.This essay analysed the which way is better for communication.
The most prominent reason behind may stand is that,direct communication prove the real value of communication to the other person.This reason is taken into account because face to face communication is much effective way to communicate by using physical gesture,emotions and handful words.In other words,people could able to express their real value of talk using their emotions and physical movements.So, both communicators could understand the exact situation of the message.Direct communication is greater way to understand the fact which is real or not.Secondly, this is effective way to express and understand facts to both communicators.Hense,face to face communication is most effective way to understand feelings and other express an emotions.For instance,in job interview ,when job seeker attend personal interview,attitude,physical gesture and manners is most important media to express the real value of talk.
On the other hand,today people communicate via different media like Facebook and whatsapp.It is fruitless way to demonstrate the feelings.For example,if communicators communicate via e-mails and other media,sometimes they cannot able to understand real facts.Sometimes communicators could not catch the lie and real value of talk.As a consequence, misunderstandings are occurs between two individuals.
In conclusion,I believe that sometimes it is fine to written communication,but face to face communication is much superior way to communicate instead of using mediator in our daily lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02508960573 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.06866084908 2.80592935109 145% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512544802867 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 268.378929873 49.4020404114 543% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 420.25 106.682146367 394% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.75 20.7667163134 336% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.0 7.06120827912 439% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19895603926 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153960262508 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777055719863 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153960262508 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777055719863 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.8 13.0946893788 319% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.94 50.2224549098 -48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 11.3001002004 298% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.88 12.4159519038 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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