Nowadays, the family has been influent by high-speed trend and pressures, which cause a disadvantage is claimed by some people. I completely agree with this idea because of the following reasons.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that the modern life makes working time and location more flexible while people only have to work in the limited time and office approximately ten years ago. Accordingly, the working trend turns to stand by all the time through the mobile phone which can harmful the relationship between family members and grew the working pressure. It is apparently that a person who is the financial source in the family barely has time to spend with his children. Furthermore, the situation becomes worse recently, because the adoptive family greatly increase, which means that children either are raised by grandparents or babysitters.
On the other hand, the pressure not only exists in parents but also children. In Taiwan, four-fifths students have the extra education system after school, such as cram schools or art schools. This condition is relative on the busy parents and nowadays life styles, which can secretly higher the opportunity mental problems for the younger. According to the survey from Child Welfare League Foundation last year, they mentioned that the parents company is the main desire of the children. Therefore the lifestyle has affected our family in various aspects.
In conclusion, even though the society has positive impacts by modern life, I believe that it certainly cases a negative influence on families.
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 60
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...any is the main desire of the children. Therefore the lifestyle has affected our family i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, apparently, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.284 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68693133519 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2501725324 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.083333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147893583373 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464786269782 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398185371707 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906654842835 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363162545302 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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