Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families
*To what extent do you agree or disagree*?
In the recent decade, families discord as been on the increase which is due to number of reasons. But prompt pace and worry of present day lifestyle is having a negative impact on families. This view is shared by certain people. In my own opinion , I totally agree with the opinion because there been an increase in use of information and communication technology and great challenges pose by this present day lifestyle.
To Begin with, the use of information and communication technology has been on increase these days and this has made families less interactive in their various home, having less or no time to discuss matters affecting family or create time for family picnic. For instance, an husband who came back from work will busy his phone or laptop in his room chatting with friends, responding to different emails, commenting on various post on twitter, Facebook and Instagram, whereas, this has not be the trend in the last decade where family use best of their time to interact and discuss positive ways to improve their family. This present day lifestyle has impacted negatively on families.
Furthermore, there are various challenge in present days. You will see some one who is multiple job in order to increase his income to meet family needs therefore, having little time to rest, such person can become emotional imbalance because of stress he/she has undergo at various working place before coming home, little thing at home he/she will become irritable and violence can result. In addition, the workload at work can make someone to be depress, if workload is too much to bear. So also air pollution from the cities is another source of distress in the present days.
In conclusion, I totally agree that prompt pace and worry of present days lifestyle have impacted negatively on families because level at which people adhere to their phone and laptop are on increase and day-to-day chanlleges has been causing family discord.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98159509202 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56184435661 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542944785276 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.218785269 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.333333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134221220712 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480647603533 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511818951191 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928388625961 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385367767987 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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